Final ESSAY

Final essay
2014312711
Seonho Kim

I chose 3 article for my final essay. First article is “Migrants from Asia to New Zealand for better living” from Jeong soo’s blog. When I was young (maybe 16 years old), my English teacher said “If you want to enjoy a life of ease in your old age, you can emigrate to Canada or New Zealand.” When I saw this article, I reminded her advice, I chose it. Second article is “Russia creates its own military tablet” from Seon bo’s blog. Because my surroundings enlisted in the army, I am very interested in army recently. Furthermore it’s about IT! I love IT news. I want to know how they use tablet for military. Last article is “Egyptian high school students say system is ‘unfair’, stage protests” from Sung min’s blog. When I was middle school student, I always thought “Does student need test for education?” and “Can test distinguish between real talented student and poor student?” But I didn’t suggest any solution. So I want to know solution of Egyptian students.

First article is “Migrants from Asia to New Zealand for better living” from Jeong soo’s blog. According to this article, Asians, who is white-collar workers, are migrating to New Zealand because of better life. As a result, this phenomenon make New Zealand’s economy grow. Jeongsoo Lee said he want to live in New Zealand but he worried about racial discrimination. After saw his thought, I searched about racial discrimination in New Zealand. Many Korean people lived in New Zealand said most so kiwi are kind and friendly. So, when I get old enough, I can go to New Zealand with no worry. Jeongsoo Lee said he has never been out of Seoul. In my case, I was born in Gumi, I went to school in Gyeongsan, now I live in Suwon. Gumi is industrial city, Gyeongsan is almost farm. So I have experience lived in city and farm. I don’t like farm. Because there are so many bugs and boring. But New Zealand is not farm and not city. In other word, New Zealand is city that has beautiful nature. So I want to go there when I get old enough.

Second article is “Russia creates its own military tablet” from Seon bo’s blog. According to this article, the Russian army will adopt tablet created for military purposes. Seong bo Kim said each countries are developing military technology like Russia. But my opinion is a little different. I think rifle or machine gun is not efficient implement to modern war. Because missile can turn the tables. Because of this reason, someone said “modern war is button war.” So, I think government should try to develop missile for defense country. And he said South Korea must escape being behind the times. Actually, Korean army is one of the strongest army in the world. For example, Korea ,already, has Korea Combat Training Center, where can train army scientific. Korea army just need to change old weapons. But Korean weapon technology is not really excellent, actually behind the times. So Korea army import high-technology weapon for example jet plane. I think problem of Korea military technology is leak to other country. For advance of military technology, researcher should have sense of responsibility. Anyway, we need strong army for peace.

 Last article is “Egyptian high school students say system is ‘unfair’, stage protests” from Sung min’s blog. According to this article, Egyptian students who protesting against unfair education system suggest three demands; abolishing the system of determining student’s university, developing educational system and respecting the dignity of students and teachers. Sung min Yun said he want to compliment Egyptian student. I agree with his opinion. Because Korean student know educational system is wrong, but most student endure. They should try to change system to right. Many Korean older people think students who complain about system is loser and ignore them. Korea can’t change education system because of these social tendency. On the other hand, Egyptian student is organized well, their demand is clearly. Korean student should learn that good point to change education system, if Egyptian government accept demand of Egyptian student.

In conclusion, First article make me think about my superannuation plan. New Zealand is wonderful country to live when I’m old. Second article make me think about current Korea’s military technology. Korea should develop military-high-technology like missile. When I read last article, I think about what students should do for changing education system. Student should be organized and definitize their demand. These three article make me think a lot about social problem or personal problem.




1a. Jeong soo, Lee “Migrants From Asia to New Zealand for Better Living” Life like movies.
1b. Tajitsu, Naomi. "Becoming kiwi: Asians flock to New Zealand for better life." The Star Online. 25 June 2014. Web. 29 June 2014.

2a. Seong bo, Kim “Russia creates its own military tablet” seong bo kim.
2b. Peter Lekarev, "Russia creates its own military tablet", The Voice of Russia, July 7, Web, July 4, 2014

3a. Sung min, Yun “Egyptian high school students say system is ‘unfair’, stage protests” DynamicYun,
3b.  Amma, Thanaweya. "Egyptian high school students say system is 'unfair', stage protests" Ahram Online, 01 July. 2014. Web. 02 July. 2014. 

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